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black sinz
structure woz nice,easy to read
very well detailed verse.flowed very well
u rhymed every line
that shit woz real funny
overall im gonna say 8/10-very gud verse...maybe cud use sum multis n more creative wordplay but woz a very gud spit

n-sight
structure woz ok but i felt ya lines were 2 long...flow woz aight,but cud b beta wit shorter linez....ur shit woz a true story so im feelin that.....but wasnt as funny n jus didnt grab my attention same as the ova cats....also a few of ur lines didnt rhyme which threw off the flow
it woz aiight but u cud do a lot beta6/10

vote-black siinz