Skadoosh!
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N-Sight
u had some alright flow considering ure lines were pretty stretched, ure structure was good cuz u kept ure shit together. u stayed on topic which is always gud and u told a gud story, it was quite chilling. u had gud wordplay in there but some of it was pretty basic but overall u dropped a gud topical verse.
Blak Siinz
playa u had sum tight flow and structure, i think u did better than n-sight in this department playa. ure verse was fuckin hilarious and i got far more enjoyment from it than n-sight's especially at the end when ure mom killed u. that shit was funny dawg!!
only problem was it sounded more like a nursery rhyme than a topical verse. also u kind of fell off topic at the end with ure mom killin u even tho it was funny. u had basic wordplay all the way thru to which let u down.
OVERALL
i'm givin this battle to n-sight cuz he had more complex vocabs and wordplay and he stayed on topic throughout, even tho i enjoyed blak's more cuz that was funny. u shud drop that shit in open mic or the poetry part!!
a little tip n-sight...when u get a battle set up set the votin to at least 100 posts to vote so u dont get any of these herb voters who don't know wat they talkin about!!
V/ - N-Sight
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