Ravage
playa u had some tight flow goin on dawg cuz u had a fixed up structure. punches tho, there were no real ones, just forced ones that weren't really hittin at all. u lacked for personals and ure wordplay was far too basic. u need to beef up ure punches and try hittin with some hard personals.
OVERALL - 5/10

KillaCam
playa u had some alright flow goin on which was gud but ure structure lacked slightly cuz ure lines were stretched. u had some personals in there that was hittin and ure wordplay wasn't all that spectacular but it was more complex than ravage. ure punches were gud, some were strong but others were weak. u still need some elevatin to do but u came gud in this battle playa!!
OVERALL - 7/10

V/ - KillaCamFlow

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