I hear the noises, in the dead of night
I creep out of my bed, in spite of the fright
NICE GOOD OPENER 7/10
I hear it, the second time this week
But I won't be scared for it is a confrontation I seek
Ok line could have found some more words 6/10
I put on my clothes, and I hear it again
I hear the faint noises, coming from the den
Pretty good line i liked it 7/10
I don't know what I'm doing, I start to convulse
But I can't stop now, I'm acting on pure impulse
Good line 7/10
I creep down the stairs, I don't make a noise
I reach for the spade, and I stand poised
Awww.not a good verse 5/10
To attack the first thing that shows it's face
I open the door, and my heart starts to race
This was a good line 7/10
What is making these sounds, in the dead of night
Will it be a monster, a beastie, I hope not to die
Pretty good line...word rearrange 6/10
I raise up the spade, I can hear the moaning
My head is ready, but my hearts not condoning
Pretty good line 6/10
The actions that I am about to take
And then I pray to God for heaven's sake
Nice shit 6/10
And then I see it, it has my mom!
It keeps stabbing her on and on and on
Use on to many time 5/10
I take the spade right to that fuckers head
I hit it again and again, until I'm sure it's dead
That was a good line 7/10
My mom starts screaming, and I don't know why
She hits me and hits me, and then starts to cry
Urmm ur mom kinda crazy lol 4/10
"Mom" I say "Why are you mad, I saved you can't you see."
She says "No faggot, that guy was fucking me!
Funny as a bitch 8/10
So she beat me and hit me, until I was dead
And she took MY spade, and hit me in MY head
Use my too many time 5/10
But before I died I let out a sigh
"But Mom... I saved your life...
Weak closer 5/10

OVERALL for blak 91/150

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