My peeps decided to move to a secluded house..close to the woods..
It had white posts and brown shingles..we were folks from the hood..
An ok opener could have been better 6/10
So, the excited of a back yard was quite large..dual garage spaces..
I was riveted when it hit me that I was going to room in the basement..
Good line 7/10
The first night was all fright..but I noticed all night a light from the hall..
Right through my door to the adjacent room..it was like a light on the wall..
Nice line if ud id not use all the light....6/10
But, all the lamps were out so it didn't make sense..and then it shifted..
Moved up the wall a few inches..my body froze in place like a stiff gets.
Nice line good 1 7/10
The chills hit my neck and travelled down my spine..I was in a panic..
I managed to get up to shut my door..but the light had already vanisnhed..
Nice shit 7/10
I ran back and jumped under the covers..I almost bumped my head..
My breathing was shallow and quick..sweat drenched my bunk bed..
Urm first line was good but second....needed work 5/10
I thought it was all over when a moment later I heard a voice that said..
"Get out..get out of this house now, or you will all be dead"..
Idk why u was still in the house after u hear GET OUT lol 6/10
It was fight or flight..so I dashed up a flight of stares to my peeps..
Out of breath, I could barely speak.."We gotta..gotta..get out..please.."
Already used the words "ights"4/10
But, they thought I was just having a bad dream..so I stayed the them..
The next day, moved all my shit upstairs becuz the basement was grim..
An alright line 5/10


**But, that's not all folks**mhuahahaaaaaa 0/10


Weeks later, that same basement became our family room..like a den..
When one night, we heard the sound of a child laughing..but kind of dim..
Ok line i lied it 7/10
After that, it became bumping in the ceilings..we were feeling puzzled..
And once the noises became constant..we started to wonder..
urmm here it goes again lol 5/10
Come to find out..the house built before ours had burned to the ground..
There were 2 fatalities in all..Mrs. Caldwell and her child..
Nice closer i lied it 8/10

Overall 72/110

Winner and get the thing reversed N Sight

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