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Old 05-31-04, 01:57 PM   #12
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king - not the best ive seen from you...opener was funny....closer didnt rhyme....but u had sum okay punches....no ones that were hard hitting....the powder verse punch was good....okay wordplay....not good meta's so elevate there....keep elevatin ur game man....give it a 7.3/10...

big - first off u broke the rule of amount of lines...ur closer was technically bit from tutorials....u had a good verse...but since u broke the rules im givin it to king solo....

vote - king solo
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