i would have to say that gkilla took this

gkilla.......your punches are okay but you could reword them so that they hit harder and stick better........your strtucture could use some work becuase i didnt really like it but your flow was okay even thought you structure was a little off.....keep elevating man.....not a bad verse

De...........your punches didnt really hit that hard in this battle i say and you could reword them aswell......keep elevating and dont space your bars out like that it takes away from your flow and makes it choppy

v/Gkilla

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