structure was fucked on both accounts

Eli........you coule work on making your punches better becuase they was weak and didn really hi.......yourstructure was okay but could also use some work......keep elevating kid

DaCroz........your verse was better...........your punches hit harder then his and they stuck.......reword the ma lil bit so they hit a little bit harder and you could work on your structure in this verse aswell man....p.pc

v/Dacroz

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