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IP:
this right here's just a rap battle,i aint dissin him//
he dissin me like a lil kid wit no disipline//
Swamp, ur piece started out strong, but you lacked a good ending, and addin a couple more bars would have been better.
Kre-Z, the GoldenState twist was tight, ur had dope lyrics, and the flow was smooth. The ending needed a little work on though.
Tight line:
I shouldn't fuck wit you bitch you ain't hard
Stuff those lyrics up yo ass then give you a discharge
Vote = Kre-Z
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