v/don

don-you had better structure and your flow was good.........you could tweek it a little bit but other then that the shit should be good.......your punches was okay but not your best.....keep elevating man

kkk- your verse was ish........your structure was okay but you need to even out your lines more so that it looks better and your flow is better......punches wasnt really there but i felt you wasnt really trying

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