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		aight don ya verse killed k'z 
don-more punches better flow,better structure and vocab 
k-your verse gotta elevate aight man but ye no beef u gotta elevate and stop usin dem played out vweak asses punchlines they aint gonna win u battle like fo example 
"i kno ya names don//" 
"but instead it should be changed to ya mothers thong//" 
 
that was weak no structure no punch no flow nothin was there but b ez 
 
v/DON 
		
	
		
		
		
		
			
		
		
		
		
	
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