don showed a lot more experience.....more organized.....punches delivered harder.....flow was better......structure made it easier to read....u need personals

kkk u also need to start using personals THEY WIN BATTLES!.....structure was kinda fucked at the end cuz u switched rhyme scheme....punches were shaky....you ended two consecutive lines with the same word "hood and hood" NEVER DO THAT.......in the future start lookin at peoples sigs,avys,past posts and threads....and all of that to find personals

vote-DON for an all around better verse

plz return the favor....i will drop a link when i get it

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