I gatta go wit Black here... he rhymed all the way thru, and had some good lines... I liked the flow, and the structure.. it was well set up and keyed up...

N-Sight.. you had the vocab portion of this battle.. for sure u used larger vocab, but your lines were pretty long, and there weren't many rhymed in the verse... It was good for a recollection of a true story tho...

Black... You had good flow, good structure, rhymed all the way thru, and it had a more entertaining theme... Overall my vote goes to you..

Vote - Black...

Good Battle By Both.