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Old 05-31-04, 08:54 PM   #8
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aight my vote is for edub cause he had punches i think that were created for this battle and his sounded more as a blind verse not lines he already had written and the one u need to work on makin ur lines longer and on structure and think of it as all one flow dont divide it up into seperate punches. edub u need to work a lil on flow and punches dont sacrifice a good punch cause it doesnt perfectly fit ur flow

v/edubz