The Epitome Of Greatness
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aiight TheOne your opener made me believe that you would kill this battle hott shyt but then the rest was filler you was just saying anything and you was talking about yourself more than your opponent never do that...you had no good punches or woredplay or multies structure and flow was decent but besides the opener your verse was preety weak...you need to focus more on punches and personals say more stuff about your opponent..
overall : 3/10
KillaCamFlow:
you had a decent opener good play off of where he lives so str8 personal...the cap gunz...win a battle line was kinda weak...but decent punch...but i think your finisher took this battle..killing spree began...backup man hott shyt right there...you still need to elevate on personals and better wordplay and multies...you had a couple decent multies and good flow...decent structure
overall: 6/10
vote: KillaCamFlow
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