Nigga keep running off at ur mouth im gonna have to Murder YA//
This is the United States of America and we not scurd of Ya//
decent flow, good multi... needs some wordplay or a good punch too make it a good opener though
Come on kid ur rhymes and punches are elemantry and ur not the ONE//
Only time u winning a battle is when ur in the back yard playing wit Cap Gunz//
weak punch, decent vocab
Way before the poll open and u attempt to drop a verse my killing spree BEGAN//
Fam ur not hott so stop,you could not even beat me if u had a Backup Man//
This was another weak punchline, I think this verse kinda lacked in intensity, but all in all it wasn't too bad just work on more solid punches and try and include more multis in ur flow.


I'm gonna bust a rhyme wit nuttin but flow
Ur name iz KillaCamFlow, more like KillaKan'tGo
This was kinda funny... decent opener it would have been better if you used KillaCamFlow in the first line, used a multi in the first syllables of the second line and ended it the way you did, but it was decent.
Therez no way u kan beat me, ur iscolated an i'm free
ur like preist in a church, i'm in the forest, a tree
this was kinda weak, the flow was o.k but very basic no punches

i'm out in the open, an have the illes' rhymes in thiz battle
i'm gonna go see the cattle, an thiz one i'm gonna sattle
??-- this doesn't really make any sense, your not really directly saying anything on your opponent- you need to use less filler rhymes and actually say something that has substance
i'll ride ya like i ain't even tryin, u run to the barn all cryin
i'll kik ya in the ass, get ma gun, bitch u dyin.... i'm gonna be flyin
nah man-- this just aint workin... Im not trying to be an ass but I think you would learn alot by reading the tutorials on this sight.
then i'm gonna see u in hell as u still cryin kuza this loss
i heard frum u that while u in bed, u do nuttin but toss

havin nightmares at the memory
don't worry, ur now in a cemetary- I think if you got more descriptive with your verses and actually used punchlines you would have won this battle, but your flow didn't have any solid punches and didn't really have much substance... My vote goes to KillaCam.

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