unlike the rest i read the om..its pretty wack...first off the first line didnt rhyme..with sets a bad start....no multis...for a guy has been on here for a while u used basic rhyme scheeme...no petic techniques..and flow was wack coz the lines were WAY to short...all the lines need to be the same lenght to make at least a basic flow...structure was ok..overall i'd say it is vvvv basic..4/10..<<thats being generous...ALSO...stop fuckin sendin me pms askin me to drop votes.....dats herbish..if u wona win battles win them by ur skill not by D/R...Good day

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