Rate Lines 1-10

after this battle, you won't be able to put your mind on this/
cuz the only shit you'll be good for is the special olympics/ 5...Average at best

i can't lose cuz im 1 of the clumps/(get it)
talkin shit, i'll sqeeze off one time and make your dick look like a thumb/ 4...wtf

i ain't a vet but yet i can rest, cuz my punches fly everywhere like a verbal tec/
i can care less if you spit hard, cuz even if you had toxic breath, BITCH, you couldn't breathe death/ 5...Decent again

and i am the best, i ain't the rest/
cuz i'll rip you haulter top to expose your breast/(PUSSY) 4...WHACK

you goin under ,craka hold your breath/
i got yah verse chokin like its blowin meth/ 3...WHACK

you way 2 wack, you can't be black/
the only heat you hold is your is your thermis in you back-pac/ 4...Again Terrible

im NEVER wack, you must be smokin crack, cuz the only way you winnin is if vanilla ice comes back and votes on that ^^^^^^/ 4...Ehhh

its ova jack, u can't fight back/
im disabling your verse's connecting like i fuckin repo rap/ 3....BAD

i got the gear, im bout to break the mold/
you structure is lookin fukin stupid like 2 left toes/ 3...Somewhat Humerous

im way past froze, im spittin sub-zero floes/
my verses's tighter than brazilian's and fuckin speedo's/ 5...Comedic

you don't deserve a win, like strobe im revokin it/
you better off askin lyrical destuction to let you in/ 4...NO

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Rhyming’s a science and “method” wuz “formulated” by a bad “hypothesis”/ If “rhymin wack” is a treasure then yo rhymes is “priceless” !! 6...Nice Thought

He’s got no rite -to- compete like drugged-up athletes / Only time he feels “instant heat” is when he’s close-to-defeat 5...Decent

He can only win one way, but den he’d forfeit to deceit/ His rhymes couldn;t get “recognition in his autobiography 5...Decent

If you “think before you speak” then no one would “hear your voice”/ How can you be “destined to rhyme” when you was “ducking the choice”* 5....

He in love wit his “clit” and lyke the “love struk” he bein pussy-whipped/ Im constructive criticism, but the way he “breaking rules“ he’d never “take-a-tip”** 6...

Saying “i mus not be blak, im wak” bitch color doesnt decide skill/ Cuz im leavin ya name green lyke billz an uya rhymes bein thrown stull aint comin ill*** 5...Decent

You cud be killed in a cement mixer but your “devotion to losin” makes u neva die-hard/ Only tyme yo “identity” is “presumed” to be iLL is when you stole a “credit card” 6...Better


His punches “cummin up short” lyke a “6 n 9” pulled out by an elf/ He wanted to dis “a pussy and a rookie” so he started dissin himself**** 7...lol


Hittin “below the belt” neva risin with a level lower den “missy elliot”/ How am i gonna disagree when he ADMITS all his spit nuthin but rhyme shit 4...Decent


[u]Obviously Potential Took this battle......Lyrical, ya need hella help on ya punches and complexity.......

Vote: Potential

Ya rhymes would never “shake the crowd” if it had its own “vibrations”/ Neva get “awards” by tryin to “affect the masses” cuz ya rhymes will get “”lost in translation”*****