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Old 06-01-04, 01:58 PM   #9
SpokenBluntly
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Your words were good but big words don't make a rhyme..ur rhyme scheme fell off and never got picked up..I loved ur direction but ur focus got lost cuz of the rhyme scheme elevate on that..*ONE*

SB lol
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