ok...genie...ur sturcture cldnt be any beta...mulits were kickin off like woah!!vocab cld be worked on and also wordplay..overal..9/10
L.I.flow wasnt thur coz u didnt keep the same shylbol count in every line...structure was nice..vocab also cld be worked on..overll 8/10..
Both nice But Genie Was A Different Class...keep Em' Cumin'..Pz

v/genie


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