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Well, its titled feelings, but I still feel it somewhat lacks coherency and direction, it sort of just moves around, without any specific end or begining, otherwise its nice. It would be nice if you worked on the flow a bit, some of the rhyme scheme I think is very nice, at other spots its a little akward. But yeah, nice drop.
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