Aiight The one you had one good punch at the beggining but it went to shit after that. WEak and I struggled to understand most of ya lyrics. The cattle and tree lines make me want to kill you.

Kill ay a had a weak verse butit was understood and landed even if they were soft.

Both of yuo had ok structure n flow

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