roop........y0ou need to not space out your bars liek that because it tkaes away from your flow and makes it look choppy at t imes.........your punches was good i thought that they hit harder then trip's so that is why i gave it to you

trip........your punches was to basic for me i didnt really feel them and your structure i dind treally like aswell......you could reword your shit and then you should be fine.....keep elevating

v/roop

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