Alright here it is...

X, You are definantly more of a topical person then a battle person. You made it feel more realistic and more like you were right there. It sounded more like what a person would think... except for hte raping in the ass part, that was just humor lmao...

Flow, Wasn't really that bad. And i dont really have anything to say to help you. You are pretty decent at topicals but X made it a little better then yours. Don't get me wrong, you had a nice topical... You just needed a little more detail and maybe some more thought into it.

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