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Old 06-01-04, 11:16 PM   #9
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From: holdin down the three-one-three
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j-poll
average verse
areas that need work....
just knocking people out with stronger punches
worst line:Got caught cheating...yet he still thinks beating me is possible...
HE LOST TO SPIKY2k8...so trust beating me ain't even plausible...
bestline:lookin like he fell through the ice...can't find the hole...
he's lost so many poll's...we might as well call him Bob Dole...
overall *7* nice drop good shit
---------------------------------deadly
you need to come way more original a'ight
cuz i heard some of them lines before in different order
areas that need work:, flow and originality
worstline: Yo Blue Print Kicked u out so u shouldint Even Rep This...
IF You Tried Out For Dark Knights You WHouldint Get Accepted...
wack this?..... accepted they dont rhyme homie
im gonna give you a low *6-------------------------
j-poll won
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