The Epitome Of Greatness
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lil-trip u surprised me with that verse it was pretty good....nice punches wordplay hott vocab and flow...i think all your bars were forced tho and stretched more than they should have been...u didnt use any personals u just put his name in your verse...decent structure...and a couple multies caught my eye but not too many hott ones...i think you overdid yourself with that many lines cuz your verse got worse as u kept going keep em short and sweet ya feel me
overall:6/10
L.E...u kept yours short and sweet like u should have...good structure but i dont like the space in between bars thing goin on there....hott flow...decent vocab...better punches than lil trip and your wordplay was hott
overall:7/10
vote: L.E
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