i changed my title !!
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breakdown for shadow's edge:
flow:good job no problems with your flow it was workin 7/10
volcab:not the top in the league like you should be tryin to be but it gets the point of the verse across i guess doesn't hurt the rhyme at all so 6/10
punches:good job at personals, nothing really new best line,"Kid, you ain’t a real artist, couldn’t even spell Van Gough" and ive seen shit like that done against vango infact i had a line similar to that in my battle gainst him anyway alright job 7/10
overall:20/30 pretty good verse
breakdown for vango:
flow:workin alright some multis thrown around not too many though 7/10
volcab:edged out shadow i think still nothing too amazing 7/10
punches:alot of lines not too much was really harsh fav line,"Why did you call the Suicide Hotline and they said "YOUR DOING THE RIGHT THING"" some alright personals too 7/10
overall:21/30
vote--really close battle here glad to see both people showin up for the title match this week my vote is for vango though
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win loss record 18-19 with 7 k.o's
and sign up for the battle league would yeah, also show up if your already in the league
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