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Old 06-02-04, 12:17 PM   #5
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OMG!!! DO i really have to give any explanation for this battle!!

OffDaTipOfMyTung
wtf??? ure structure was pretty fucked cuz lines were long then short, then long and etc...... ure flow was probably ure best point cuz ure verse flowed well. there was no punches at all and no personals or anythin. u just basically spit a little nurserym rhyme. u need some serious elevatin and i aint gonna bother explainin all ure shit, u need to work on everythin, go read the tutorials!!


N-Sight
structure was gud, flow was gud as always, u didn't try i can tell but it aint like u had to. ure wordplay was pretty basic and shit and ure punches were just average hittin punches but at least u had some. couple of personals that were gud, but really sight, at ure level u shudn't be battlin little herbz like this dude!!

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