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Old 06-02-04, 01:54 PM   #20
DeaDly RhymeZ 01
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Yo U played 1 Shit BUt it CAme out good the Part about her SOunding like a man
played out but it came out right

YO Kitten UR intro Was Better THan u Verse u shouldint do Audio's CAuse it Caused u to a First loss

Punches-- Smiley
Creativty-- Smiley
Flow-- LattinKitten
Wordplay-- Smiley
Vocab-- LattinKitten
Overall-- Smiley

Smiley comes with my vote


he had better Shit


Yo around town, your known as a local whore
Had a sex change but forgot to exchange your vocal cords (you still sound like a man)
I mean damn this shit just really had me scamed
Though you was female come to find out im battling a man
Or is it a female, or wait you probably grew balls
Congratulations your raps first version of rue paul

NICE LINES 8/10

gay shemale, no one cares when you speak ya rhymes
You’re a woman and yet ya voice is almost as deep as mine
And nah I aint post my pic up but bitch so what
Ya so ugly when I clicked on your pic my computer froze up
Just grow up Carla, your fake and ya weak
Heres 2 pennies that’s more money than you make in a week

Nice 7/10

Your bound to get raped in the streets, you’re a ugly selection
Ever since you came out ya moms clit she started using protection
I could never get an erection from you slut, youll never date
compared to you the offspring of Michael Jackson and a set of apes
Would result in a better face

Good 6/10

But see Id advise plastic surgery but nah your past that
My toilet roll looks better than your face after whipping it on my ass crack
Just face it your raps wack
You being tight,, lol.. nah nigga
You sound like a retarted version of rah digga

7/10

Everyones fucked you whore, you love getting drilled with hits
Ya mouths like a gay pride parade- always filled with dicks
Be real bitch ya pussies repulsive and ya pinks wrong
Ya vaginas oder could be used as a stink bomb

OOH SHIT VAGINAS ODER CHOULD BE USED AS a NICEEEE 8/10

Lets get this on , and let it be known that I hate you
You’re the first chick whos adams apples the size of a grapefruit
And yeah I posted a porn chicks pic in my sig but hey
Id post your pic too but it’d probably scare kids away

FUckin FUNNY 7/10

Ya intro wasn’t funny, at best it was retarted
How hard bitch, you posted a audio of when I first started
Saying my shit doesn’t flow, that’s just fake crap hoe
Heres my cum down you throat bitch take that flow!

7/10

OVerAlL : 50/70


LATTIN KITTEN


u couldnt back ur wack shit n its pretty drastic/
a latin chick got a better flow then a black kid..
u WHITE WASHED ... couldnt even get on my BLACKLIST...
smiley kid ..u just a COLON n a BRACKET : )
his raps is shit ...cuz the COLON's where the ass is........
so practice.. this dude is really on some dumb shit/
ridin instrumentals dont mean jumpin on a trumpet/

Nice 7/10

i'll never PLAY UR TRACK kid..has it even sunk in/
RUN INTO HIM... so that he can say that i have BUMPED HIM//
i'll dump him ...take ur fucken garbage verses elsewhere/
how u gon' WORK me when he still receivin WELFARE//

ok Decent 5/10

FUCK IT. u suck kid..there's no comparin him//
u'll never be a VET unless u mean a VETerinarian.....

OMG 6/10

BEAT SWITCH

he boasts but he couldnt even post up his-picture/
and he posted a photo of a porno hoe in his signature//
we talkin bout FURNITURE when he claims to have CHESTS in his bedroom/
i chopped off smiley kids LIMBS just to give him some LEGROOM/

5/10

where is ur head fool,MC PAT's childmolester name..ur rap name is wack//
they callin him that after his punches... cuz they a PAT on the back/
fag,u aint even black..PAT-TRICK (Patrick) i see the BITCH in u...this kid is lame//
only chick he ever been close to is probably the TRICK in his name//
he aint got no game...

5/10

shit kid talkin over beats doenst mean that u're spittin/
TALK UR WAY OUTTA THIS KID .....his flow dont even seem to be existin//
i'm persistent...this fat kid couldnt win unless he tried to sit on me/
THROW FECES AT ME just so he can say that he has SHIT ON ME//
6/10

bet u livin in SECTION 8 with u poor ass... so it figures/
6 NAKED CHICKS on a pornsite only time he sees 6 FIGURES//

wEAK CLoser 6/10

Overall : 40/70


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