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Old 06-02-04, 03:34 PM   #14
Enhance
Seriously , I'm i`ll man.
 
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DV - ur struc need improvement but u still had good punches and i liked ur vocab and some of the lines really standed out
MC - damn u need made elevation u should not be battling her ur structure was fucked up also...
easy battlle
V/DV.
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