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Old 06-02-04, 06:57 PM   #14
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^ehh u def. showed some potential.....had a few nice personals in there....some lines were kinda newbish...u had some nice set up's where u kinda lost it at the end....for the most part its a good verse for a newb....i will get at u later
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