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Old 06-02-04, 07:01 PM   #26
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polifick:

u juss lost might as well delete yo self from dis tournament...
u gettin embaraseed go back 2 m-section from discourgment...
^^good opener nice personal 7/10
i take yo soul like mortal combat.. and leave it in "skriptz"....
then pass it verse back..right after ur lyrics easly get ripped...
^^another good personal and punch 7/10
throwing disconnected punches like his fist and wrist not connected...
i advance 2 da next round while he go 2 tutorial for some corrections....
^^str8 shyt but the tutorial line is played 5/10
teach u a lesson..verses gettin destroyed like his linez in lethal injection...
give u in affection..then bitchslapp u back 2 front linez to a new section...
^^not too hott with multies decent punch 4/10
killin him like fugee holders..polifick here ready roc dis baby back 2 bed....
blow his head off his shoulders..spit his wack lyrics back at him instead...
^^1st line good the ending of line 2 is played also 5/10
..<< better than yo whole verse im da king u juss ruthless pawns...
rapbattles not for u go back 2 chatrooms Ims and try goldMic.com...
^^just weak 3/10
tossin u out the deck like jokers. voterz juss give me da vote and u declined..
i dont kno wat im wasteing more my Linez or my time..im ahead u fallin behind..
^^str8 bar good punch good wordplay 7/10
da only time u catching a Ko is when u playin da ps2 game fight night....
your right u suck at audio and ill think twice about your text types..
^^good closer decent punch 6/10

overall : 44/80

m-section:

My perfect spits hav murdered shit….so I’ll continue to boast…
You’ve got courage but no wisdom… against me at the most..
^^good shyt nice wordplay feelin this 7/10
Don’t temp me.. you already know U cant win this..
So after I`m done ripping you..open the bible & pray for forgiveness..
^^bible lines played 2nd line stretched 5/10
I’ve acknowledge your wack & I don’t blaim you.. I just blaim ur roots..
Cos the only time he gets girls..is on GTA’s street prostitutes..(sig)
^^lol good personal felt this bar 8/10
Quit doing text.. its been destroyed , dawg… what happened?
Coz Everyone use to love hiphop… Until you started rappping
^^consistent punches good shyt 8/10
I’m superb with words.. ya know.. I`m leaving cats lost with a twist
If you quit the game right now… We can say wackness don’t exist
^^anyother good punch not as hott as others 6/10
I`m perfection @ it’s finest & you know my spits do please..
Mannn…the only time he's WRAPPINGS a 'gift' is on christmas eve.
^^wrapping lines are played 4/10
I’m historical , been writing scripts… Since the ages of the Romans
& my punches connect better like... From Dial Up to Cable modems
^^good shyt nice punch 7/10
Make no excuses you blow , so . .You never need to remind me..
How can you be that WACK – you joined RB 1 month behind me
^^good personal decent closer 7/10

overall : 52/80

vote: m-section

i think his punches came harder had better wordplay structure was better...prolifick took the personals category cuz m only used one...wordplay from both was sick tho..
and both verses were pretty consistent...but i think Ms punches just came harder


can someone drop a honest vote on flow intelligent vs. shadows edge in thsi text tourney ty

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