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Old 06-02-04, 08:06 PM   #1
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publicity u had a decent verse... good structure decent punches 1 good personal... wordplay wasnt too good either was ya vocab...flow was consistent..you had a decent verse but you need to work on punches a bit more...yours didnt hit too hard..

overall: 5/10

jpoll you didnt have to hott of a verse either but your closer won this battle for you.. it was a close battle cuz u didnt have too many hard hittin punches either and ya structure was a lil choppy...same as publicity with the flow stayed consistent...good wordplay..decent vocab..overall good verse

overall: 6/10

vote:jpoll

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