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close battle.......smarts dont up 6 times or you will be dqued but yeah
smartzz takes this becuase his punches was better.......lil trip elevate.....your ish was okay but it wasnt as gud as smartzz.......but yo smartzz you need to take out all the ***'s and shit outa your verse it makes it look really messy and takes away from the flow also work on your structure so your lines are all one line
v/smartzz
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