IMAO...lil slipa ur punches were very week..u tlk bout ur self the whole time sides about 2 lines..its ok to tlk bout ur self sumtimes..but make sure u get more punches in...very week verse..
outsider...beta...most punches hit harder...i seen a few multis...but they were gr8..but its nice to em in a newb....good form both but vote/outsider

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