deadly you definately took this battle...your verse wasnt hott tho it was jus str8... you had a couple good punches the rest were decent...your structure was nice and your flow was consistent... you had 1 bar that didnt really rhyme but it didnt affect your verse much...

overall: 6/10

outsider your verse was just bad about 95% of it didnt even rhyme so there was no sense in even posting that... you had punches but when it doesnt rhyme then its not a battle more like a spoken diss instead of a spoken rhyme thats where you messed up.. some of your bars were stretched and/or forced and your wordplay wasnt too good you need to elevate in alot of areas

vote: deadly rhymez 01

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