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Old 06-03-04, 10:04 AM   #11
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THIS BATTLE WAS WEAK AS FUCK
NO OFFENSE


BREAKDOWN
N-Sight: sight u had a nice structure to ure drop, nothin too stretched everything was kept close together, ure flow was tight flowin well from start to finish. personals were there, but not many and those that were there were pretty weak. ure punches were mainly average with a couple of hard ones but all had conenction. not much for creativity and ure wordplay was rather basic, nuthin too complex that stood out to me
OVERALL 7/10...u came weak in this battle playa!!!

Battlesnake: i have no clue at wat the fuck u were tryin. i shud vote against u purely cuz u shud be DQ'ed for takin twice the time. ure lines were stretched like fuck and u had no flow at all really in ure drop, needs some serious improvement in that area. ure punches were all pretty weak with some played out shit. u lacked in creativity seriously and ure wordplay was far too basic. u lacked in personals and basically everything, u need some serious elevatin to do, work on ure punches and personals and fix up that structure. OVERALL 5/10...very weak!!

V/ - N-Sight
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