battlesnake your punches werent hott they was str8...wtf is up with your structure too...put that shyt into lines not paragraphs...it dont look right how you doin it and it causes less of an impact on your verse...u had no personals which is why n-sight thought it was pre-written and the fact that it did take 40 mins to drop a 20 min key.
your verse lacked in every area

overall: 2/10

n sight u didnt come to hott either...you had a couple decent punches and hott ass wordplay and multies but i dont think you showed your full potential and i think against black u didnt need to bring your A game... good structure consistent flow decent meta's couple nice punches good verse

overall : 6/10

vote: n-sight

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