INSIDIOUS

Flow/Structure
Your flow was good I was feeling your verse all the way through. The structure needs improvements because it was pretty weak in places. Some of your lines were short whilst others were stretched mad. OVERALL 6/10

Personals/Punches
Alright, this was your best part, there was not many personals in your drop but the couple that were there were pretty funny. Your punches were good, some were played but mostly they were hitting hard. OVERALL 7/10

Creativity/Originality
You sort of did average in this department because whilst you had a tight rhyme scheme and you used some good wordplay you did not have anything all too special and some of it was pretty played. You had some nice multis in your verse but your best part was your metas because they were dope. OVERALL 7/10

CREAM

Flow/Structure
You lacked in this seriously, your flow was choppy all through your verse. This was probably down to the fact that your structure was weak, lines stretched and lines squashed when really it should all be kept together relatively the same length. You need to work on this area a lot. OVERALL 5/10
Personals/Punches
I can't really say that you had any personals in your drop at all which was a downer. You had some average punches, but none of them were really hitting. You were mainly rapping about guns and shit, you need to hit him with the personals and beef up your punches because you were lacking. OVERALL 5/10

Creativity/Originality
This part was really weak because you had some pretty basic wordplay, got nice in some sections. The fact that you were texting with some small letters and some capital and what not made it hard to read. You had like no multis and I couldn't see any metas in your drop. You used a gay line which is sooooo played out and you need to drop that and come with more original punches. OVERALL 5/10

V/ - insidious

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