fat pockets, wood grain, stackin g's, sippin cris, platinum plaques?....


the last part of your verse was a little more personal...the first part was commercial crap....seems like it might flow well, but you're lacking some content...alot....

work on wordplay and feed off of your pain...hip hops alot more than stackin g's....

My name's kleetus kleaver...this is my first post...keep it up....be easy..