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Old 06-03-04, 12:34 PM   #10
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kre-z
ure spit did not flow well at all, ure structure was fucked up cuz u had far too many stretched lines and some really short ones. u had no hard hittin punches whatsoever and u lacked in personals to. u had some played out lines and really just had nuthin original. OVERALL 5/10

outsider
u came pretty weak but u came better than kre-z. i think ure flow was gud in places but really fucked up and choppy in other places. ure structure too needs work, u need to keep ure shit together man. u had sum aight punches but nuthin hard hittin and u two need to work on ure personals and get some originality into ure drop. ure just usin basic played out shit most of the time. OVERALL 6/10

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