this guy thinking he street..claiming he been shot 9 times!/
oh..im really feelin that,he from tha real rough streets of cali 909!/

dawg uap like u need an abortion...suffering from growing pains/
my granny hits harder...n ur style cud do with her zimma-frame/


^^ Funny opener...good punch...dunno how accurate it is tho

so bitch u gona hve to deploy ur entire u.s con-voy/
ma british intelligence has u cornered..now ima de-stroy

so i murder u wit a-war-of-words..u jus cnt get wit ma hot-verbs/
my gun bout to cock,blow n serve..show u up 2 be a crew of-herbs/


^^ decent closer..could have been more creative

im hittin this flamer wit foreign objects... eatin em like i was the t rex
its the eckz ready to per-plex comin harder like i jus got oral sex
yea theres a storm in here .....but i think its jus the weather
cuz im the real attention getter ....not jus some imitation leather

^^ Not bad...a couple played out punches tho

Rhyme Tie
FLow Tie
Punches Storm

Vote: Storm, better overall