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Old 06-03-04, 05:48 PM   #19
Illynice
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kkk haters verse

Yo I use these lyrics as a knife cutting out ur vocals and watchin ur BLACK ass scream//
The blood drippin to the floor making me wonder if anyone could here the SMACK// ( of the blood on the floor)
horrible opener first of all black shouldn't be the rhyme because it doesnt flow well with the next line and smack.. dont ever rhyme a word thats not at the end of a line unless its a double rhyme your rhymes should be at the end of your sentence, this was one terrrible opener lacked creativity also

ur mother's maden name is trish the white traller TRASH//
who's dirty ass gave me my painfull RASH//
ok this shit is elementary but nevertheless its funny however not that dope

so do not act like u are a THUG//
for all ur white ass needs is a prisoners HUG//
yawnn..zzzzzzz.lol ohh my bad shit was terrible yo boring crap

So go on bitch let us no how it feels to be called a WHIGGA//
u are a pain in the ass with all these wanna be mc's and u are iratating me like a CHIGGA//
this line was especially bad because black siinz is not even white

So I am threw with this shit before this vote can count to 2//
u are gonna no who is dishin U//
overall: terrible verse disses and rhymes were elementary as fuck shit was boring as hell also.

black siinz verse
You'll Fear This Vet! Peers Face Death! This Emcee-Aint-Fresh...
...You Aint Seein-My-Text Matta Face 'See-A-Mess...
And I Knew You Was "Crap" But Didn't Know You Wuz "B.S"...
ok lines i felt like you could have come harder here i know your opponent sucks but you still should come your hardest ive seen you come with shit 10 times better than this

This guy the think hes the best but got sunned by The One...
Take this dude ravage his soul and make this pussy run...
Hes the hater of Klu Kluks Klan but if you look at his pic...
You see one by one him sucking each of their little dicks...
lol nice closer overall i know this wasnt one of your best efforts but nevertheless it was enough to get the win

vote- black for overall harder hitting punchlines and less herbish material than his opponent
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