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Old 06-03-04, 07:03 PM   #23
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Originally Posted by VanGo
idiot, thats why they call them punchlines, uppin

dont fuckin hate on my vote
because your verse fucking sucked
I was trying to be nice


See Shadow stopped writing the Mag, because half a Mag just wouldnt be complete
But why cant we keep it real man, "Who the Hell wants to Predict their own defeat"
first of all, why did you 'this around" what you said,it was a average opener
And since your done writing the Mag, I'll guess I'll have to do this weeks review
I have to tell you Shadow the only difference between Champ and Chump is "U"
this line is played to shit!!, get the fuck outta here
You got the Championship by NO SHOWS, proof that miracles can happen
But Id suggest you stay at Burger King and forget your career in rappin
wtf,tellin him to stay at burger king is a punch?bwhahahahaha
How'd you ever get the misconception that your rhymes were nice
I heard you went to Mindreader the other day "But only paid half the PRICE"
this is where you started to tell these corny ass jokes, they sounded like they came from comic view rejects
Simply put you aint even on my level,you dont deserve step inside my Ring
Why did you call the Suicide Hotline and they said "YOUR DOING THE RIGHT THING"
OMFG,JUST FUCKING WACK!
Shadow your like the Madrapper of RB, maybe i can get LATINKITTEN TO GIVE U A HUG
See Shadows can only exist with Light, so heres Goodnight, "I GOTTA PULL THE PLUG"
WHY THE HELL, was this so fuckin strecthed?and the punchline in general fuckin sucked,and the set-up was gay, regardless, shadow edged beat the living scar tissue out your weak ass
Have a nice day
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