I think its real hot...a lot of people try to touch bases with this subject..but you did a good job of being different and original...I like it!
So desperately I am trying to forget,
All the things I swore that I'd never regret,
I think that someday I'll wake up and feel the sun,
I'll forget about the damage I've done,

I cry
For the things that I have left behind
I cry
And I think that I might lose my mind
I cry
As I stumble through the dark of night
I cry
Will I ever see the light?

^^^this was really the thing that caught me...keep writin your feelings and emotions straiight from the heart...and noone can ever say your pieces are wack...Uno