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Old 06-03-04, 07:59 PM   #14
Know-Gimix
The Ups and Downs of Life
 
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Yo I'm not gonna lie and say I really felt either of you in this but Ill break it down the best I can....

young beezy... your first couple verses seemed to flow o.k, It was better than Blacmons but nothing special- your structure wasn't too great but it was better than blacmons -Barely... I think both of you came with very simple punchlines no wordplay really- The best verse in this battle kinda didn't exist it was more who was worse and i found blacmons verse to be the worse of the two so Ima give this battle to Young Beezy, but I think you both should check the tutorial section or talk to some of the kids in elevated and seek out some instruction if you wanna do well at this. Vote- Young.
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