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Old 06-03-04, 08:04 PM   #13
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mafia why u commin at don wit dat weak shit home boi..elevate mad aight b...

DOn u got this wit better punches flow vocab and structure but overall yur verse was waayyyy betta then this cats but ye D stay up try out for L.T and Mafia elevate b..aight
v/DON
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