This was a hot battle... I think both of you came with a few really good lines- heres my breakdown....

lil trip? what you like lil flip cousin/
after this your losses are gonna be up to a dozen//
Simple- but effective punchline.- I also liked your closer, but I think your structure killed your verse, everyline was different then the last or next, looks very choppy to me.


Yo the Television static n spits hit faster than two fully loaded Automatics
you couldnt write a Classic if Nas ripped three of his Sentences off of Illmatic
Im raps Book n "Clock" on yo Block so take my spit n "Learn" n "Watch..'
If i let yo spits sit at my glock even a taste of it wouldnt make you spit Hot
homie get off my dick you love my style n i make you feel like Lloyd n "Smile"
pussy don start reppin yo freestyle cus U memorized the whole DVD of 8-mile
U jus a fool bro n yo style wit yo spits are like yo arms the size of a "noo-dle"
Homos want "More-Room" bro U couldnt win if U do a Lyric hunt on "goo-gle"

I think from your opener to here you killed it.... packed with punchlines, some wordplay a few multies.. The structure was good throughout... I think your verse fell off at the end but these openeing 8 lines are strong enough to take this battle in my opinion. I think the fact that Statics lines were so inconsistent in length played a big part in this vote for me because you both had some good lines in your verses I just felt Lil-Trips a little more -Vote - Lil-Trip... Please return the fav..
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