breakdown for rising sun:

flow:workin for me i had no problems with it good job 6/10

volcab:alright i guess nothing against it coming from me alright job 6/10

punches: best line,"To murk-this-tyrant with flows harder than that of fire-hydrants" kinda played idea but you did alright here 6/10

overall:18/30 well rounded verse lacked anything to really help stand out from the others in the league though

breakdown for valor:

flow:kinda choppy some of the bars got way outta hand and too long without any real internal rhyming to help it out not a great job here 4/10

volcab:nothing really to talk about you could use some work 5/10

punches:i wasn't liking any of this you need some work here too 5/10

overall:14/30 gotta say better then alot of my early stuff you'll pick it up just keep working on it

vote--rising sun

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win loss record 18-19 with 7 k.o's


and sign up for the battle league would yeah, also show up if your already in the league