breakdown for whitegold:

flow:really basic it was workin i guess though there was a couple of lines really streched that hurt it but you know alright for a newbie 5/10

volcab:need some elevating really basic like it hurts you vese basic 3/10

punches:you addressed him everyline i'll give you that, but the quality of the lines is your big problem all of the lines seem to be as being a fan of old school rap taken right from the early 80's and hense there really played and just not good try to come up with new orginal ideas if you can't come up with anything orginal then atleast word your lines better 4/10

overall:12/30 i see that ability to elevate there just alot of work ahead of you

breakdown for brethern:

flow:really for bragging bout it this wasn't much better then whitegold 5/10

volcab:average array a step above white but that doesn't say much right 5/10

punches:fav line,"You sucking at rhymes...you couldn't silence peopleIf you were fucking a mime..." you didn't address him as much as he did you but the qaulity of your lines was way higher pretty good job 6/10

overall:16/30

vote--brethern gets my vote

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